Re: Dear Dad
This is very deft. I like the enjambment of several lines, and the subtle rhymes. And I love using the short sentence "Read the stars" to start both a line and a stanza. The one thing that stands out...
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Norm, Jack is right, a less flippant title such as he suggests would do right by the poem. This is your Dylan Thomas side, at its best.
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Alright, father knows best it is. Thanks for that Jack. Mike, you caught my vain left ear with the ludicrous Thomas comparison, though it's great to share a sentence with him I must say. I will keep...
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